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This story takes place after season 1 of Angel Beats in Yuzuru Otonashi's point of view. This is my first fan fic. so enjoy!!!

When she left I cried, there was nothing  better  to do, it's not like there  is a way to bring her back , her last words still hurt too much.  I don't know why I have to stay in this wretched place because all it does is bring back memories of her . Suddenly , I heard a loud crash , It must be the Newbies.
"Sorry Mr.Otonashi  sir , HIROSHI thinks that it's ok to break windows",
" SHUT UP HANA , YOU  KNOW YOU MADE ME !" I heard Hiro yell from a short distance away.
"EVERYBODY SHUT UP ," I yelled , still upset about the previous month's disaster.
"Stop arguing I'm sick of it , we have more important things to worry about . You could've attracted the shadows and the guild would once again be moved to another location."
"It's not like we are perfect angels , and plus the stupid defaults aren't going to do anything abou-
"Go", I said . She said "Angels". Angel  , God  I miss her . I wish I could truly die . I'm tired of living with this pain.
"Otonashi are you okay?" Hiro asked  .
"No" I admitted. so we sat and I told him everything.
I felt a little better now that I talked to Hiro about her. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a hazy figure I glanced at Hiro, He nodded, we knew what was about to go down. I grabbed my handgun trying not to alert the shadow . I shot the creature dead in the chest .
"What the heck happened"!? Hana asked
My eyes shifted past her and there behind her were more shadows.
"LOOK OUT"!! Hiro yelled
But it was too late, the shadows had grabbed her and she stood there looking numb with a blank expression on her face as she sunk into the ground . All we heard was the final breath she took before she disappeared completely.
"no ,no ,NO"!!  Hiro screamed. "she was all I had left"
Something like this had never occurred before. No one had ever disappeared into the ground before. Something was wrong , Hana would have fought back against the shadows.
Instead she stood there like a dead body. Hiro was crying and clawing at the ground until his fingers bled. I was worried for him and for Hana. What happened? I needed to know
I really hope you enjoyed this, stay tuned for part 2 :3


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kyoko otari
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
I just absolutely love horror films and t.v. shows.
My favorite show is the walking dead on amc ( Favorite character is Daryl Dixon ) and my favorite movie is spawn. Ever since i was 5 years old i have been watching horror entertainment.i am a bit creepy but im sure you'll like my art.

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DoctorDuckie Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave :heart:
steampunkmickey Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob
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